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Speak No Evil: Part 1

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Chapter 1
Luigi's POV
I shuddered, why was I here again. Oh, that's right. I was helpping Mario save Peach again. A sigh escapes my lips, it was taking forever to get to Bowsers castle. I look past my brother in red onward to the many hills, "not to sound rude, but, how much longer?" Mario half glance at me and new I was more conserned with if we're going to make it before dust. Mario smiled, "almost there Bro, just a little longer." I nod before continuing on, the sun going down behind me.
Minutes pass and I still couldn't see the castle. I try to remember how long it took us last time. I shudder in the reliesation that it took us nearly four days. I didn't relise a was so cought up in my own thoughts that I didn't see mario stop until I was so far in the dark that I couldn't see a thing, "m-mario?" I waited with no answer, "Mario?!?" With no answer still I tried turning around and retracing my steps. Little did I know, while I wasn't paying attention, Mario was taken by a Kamek.
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No POV
Minutes pass and the sun has set. Mario stopped, deciding it'd be best to set up camp here and wait till dawn. After all, what's the wurst Bowser could do to Peach, Mario chukkled at his own thought. He looked around for Luigi, only to find him walking passed him. He tried to call out to him but a hand cupped his mouth and a metal pipe hit head upside the head, afictivly knocking him out.
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Edit: I'm officially changing the name to the series, I was thinking about this for a while, and I think this title suits the story better.
I honestly started with Luigi, Colf\d and Alone because it was suppose to be a story able Luigi's adventure saving Mario, but I just kept on, I really like how this story is going and I hope I can start updating again soon. It's just been kind of hard. I won't start ranting, but I will say that it was really, really hard after I started high school. A LOT of stuff has happened
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CatImAKittyKat's avatar
Please finish this ^^